Jun-Jun Villanueva Poet ABC

' Wake Up '

apathy benumbed, chaotic deeds embroidered
friendships gnawed, hatred indurated
jiffy keen loss met, noble outrage preserved
queries repudiated, songs tuned unheard
vague wisdom exalts, youth zzzzzzzzzzzz.......

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Elizabeth Wesley July 28, 2011 at 11:03 PM Amazing verse Jun Jun, I'm not familiar with the ABC thing but hope to giv it a try. You did a fantastic job.

Kin Kinomoto July 28, 2011 at 12:14 PM wow, just wow. I liked this alot, nice ending

David Williams July 27, 2011 at 8:13 AM like it jun-jun, good ending, David

Nette Onclaud July 27, 2011 at 8:06 AM a visuall feast, jun... enjoyed the surprising zzzzzzz..:) hugggs, nette