Wake Me

Wake Me Somebody wake me from this dream This nightmare that I live... Somebody shake me 'else I scream Lost in this silent sieve... Somebody take me from this stream I'm drowning in my drib... Somebody wake me from this dream This fractured Adam's Rib. ©deborah burch--2006

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Terry O'Leary

Date: 4/29/2012 6:44:00 PM

Sometimes the reality is worse than a nightmare! ... I'm glad you liked the limericks... I'm working on something else you might like (no limerick though), might take a while... Terry

Deborah Burch
Date: 12/9/2016 4:27:00 PM

Indeed!! Hugggs. Deb

George Aul

Date: 4/14/2012 12:05:00 PM

Bandages all around.......George

Deborah Burch
Date: 4/14/2012 12:22:00 PM

:) thank you George! big hugs,love deb

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/14/2012 7:12:00 AM

Cute one..I got a chuckle..I don't know if you meant it that way..Yes, man is not whole anymore without a woman to complete him for he has something missing..So Adam has a fractured rib that hasn't healed...Thanks for stopping by..I had a terrible experience with a Jellyfish sting..I hope that your son's family know that they can still sting even when dead..Those barbs will shoot out with their poison..I have never heard of anyone eating Jellyfish or having one in a tank..Sara

Deborah Burch
Date: 4/14/2012 7:34:00 AM

LOL...he knows Sara, no worries, he's a paramedic,etc and the whole family...He was pulling my leg because he knows how I love animals so much and how they show up at my door...lol big huggss,love deb

The Situation

Date: 4/13/2012 8:34:00 PM

liked the way you used your words. especially adam rib. you probably have most people guessing the answer to what half of them should already know. haha

Deborah Burch
Date: 4/13/2012 8:43:00 PM

thank you Si...indeed...lol...love,deb

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 4/13/2012 8:33:00 PM

Yuppers, just checked. Dorothy Parker. If you haven't perused her fab poetry, I suggest you do. I think you'd enjoy her style, wit and insight.

Deborah Burch
Date: 4/13/2012 8:38:00 PM

too cool..thank you!! I look forward to reading it!! Thank you for your encouragement...love,deb

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 4/13/2012 8:30:00 PM

Okay, now that is MINT. So very much in so little. SILENT SIEVE? Fantastic. This reminds me of .... hmmm.... is it Dorothy Parker? Hmmmm... will have to get back to you. Do you read her? If I'm right, you'd dig her groove :) Cyndi

Deborah Burch
Date: 4/13/2012 8:36:00 PM

thank you soooo much Cyndi!! no I haven't but I will look her up... :) thank you bighugs--love,deb