Waiting's Knife

…waiting’s knife
slices time in broader swaths
stacking jagged moments
chaffing minutes raw, in existential unease
…one second snags the next
                       …the knife dulls
moments fray and shred
tomorrow folds today; time’s teeth - rounded
memories meld a transcendent balm
deeply rubbed by fading voices

a hospice hallway dims…
one light - grows brighter
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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February 3, 2016 at 3:29 AM
David, Congratulations, on your awesome win. LOVE LINDA
A. Sharma Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 2:30 AM
Lovely poem n win david.. big congrats!
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January 28, 2016 at 11:25 PM
a smashing end line, david.. sweet congrats and huggs!
Scars Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 1:22 PM
David, congrats on your placement in the contest, a great poem :) *smiles* -luloo
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