Waiting Woes

It’s sheer agony—
The silence hangs like
a cold breath in the air;

    Worse than waiting
    for death in a battlefield,
    Worse than waiting to
    reach ashore adrift at sea,
    Worse than the maddening thirst
    in the middle of the desert
    Or getting lost in the wilderness
    finding no way out—

It is waiting for the one who sits
in a corner sulking to come around.


~"Waiting" contest by Craig Cornish
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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A   Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 3:29 AM
Abdul, Congratulations, on your awesome win. LOVE LINDA
A. Sharma Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 2:29 AM
Lovely poem n win abdul.. big congrats!
Onclaud Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 11:18 PM
well delivered, adbul! fine congrats to you and huggs!
Scars Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 1:19 PM
Abdul, congrats on your placement :) *smiles*-luloo
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January 27, 2016 at 12:30 PM
Wishing you the best of luck. SKAT
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