Waiting Wishes

Wishing wasn't worldly known
worried weary were the stones
watching waiting wailing stars
wanted wishes to be ours.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Spears Avatar
March 3, 2010 at 5:09 PM
Love the alliteration as well as the theme. Thanks for your comments on my work. Happy writing.
Austin Avatar
March 3, 2010 at 12:30 PM
This is a charming puzzle, Jessica. There is something so otherworldly about it. BIG LOVE, daver
Kendrick Avatar
March 3, 2010 at 11:21 AM
Great idea to wish upon the stars. Great alliteration in this one. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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