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Waiting Wishes

Wishing wasn't worldly known
worried weary were the stones
watching waiting wailing stars
wanted wishes to be ours.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/3/2010 5:09:00 PM
Love the alliteration as well as the theme. Thanks for your comments on my work. Happy writing.
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Date: 3/3/2010 12:30:00 PM
This is a charming puzzle, Jessica. There is something so otherworldly about it. BIG LOVE, daver
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Date: 3/3/2010 11:21:00 AM
Great idea to wish upon the stars. Great alliteration in this one. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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