Waiting To Exhale

Softly dressed in a black top to hinge 
Brown chinos skirt and beige watch 
Hair resplendent in curly full fringe 
With cute accessories to match 

Her voice rings out in a velvety tone 
“Obim oh, am gonna love you” 
Heart filled with sweetness so prone 


Her food rests on a meal of fish 
Fish prepared in diverse forms 
Its sauce slushed with peppery dish 
Mellowed by drinks, so fizzy they burn 

In her anger, she struts with a raging heat 
Her strides, pressured by a desire to excel 
Like the wind, filled with the beat 
Of many shoes and waiting to exhale

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 12/18/2014 4:33:00 AM
Thanks @ all. I feel loved
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Date: 10/24/2014 10:27:00 AM
wonderful imagery Emeka:-) I hope to read lots more of your works in the future:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/26/2013 6:00:00 AM
hmmm
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Date: 8/9/2012 5:19:00 AM
A belated welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you today Emeka. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol 08/09/2012
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Date: 8/6/2012 12:47:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup! Very nice poem look forward to reading more!~Tammy~
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Date: 8/4/2012 10:32:00 AM
Wow I really enjoyed this poem u should post more ;)
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