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Waiting Patiently

waiting patiently...
drinking in the warm soft sun
oranges ripen
  


For the contest; Very Strict Haiku
Sponsored by Charles Henderson

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Poet Destroyer A

November 24, 2011 at 12:38 AM

PAULA, ;-) stopping by to wish you and everyone a happy THANKSGIVING! ENJOYED YOUR HAIKU,, `" Have yourself a wonderful and lovely holiday. God Bless,.. p.d.

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer

November 22, 2011 at 5:00 PM

Excellent Paula! So jealous that you can do this form flawlessly :)

Tracy Edwards

November 21, 2011 at 5:14 PM

Juicy Paula..i luv it :) xx

Jancarl Campi

November 20, 2011 at 9:56 PM

you painted a beautiful picture in this haiku

Carrie Richards

November 11, 2011 at 11:51 AM

this makes me want to pick, and let the juice run down my chin! mmm !! ps...a big thank you for my placement in your contest, Paula. What a great word "being" to inspire many different roads! Thanks very much!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

November 10, 2011 at 8:40 PM

beautiful lines of visual delight Paula.. good luck in the contest .. thankxx for your choosing my Superb Being for one of your winners tonight.. this write meant much to me as your theme prodded my creative juices very much.. thankxx for inspiration and honor of winning luv.. much appreciated ...