Waiting Patiently

waiting patiently...
drinking in the warm soft sun
oranges ripen
  


For the contest; Very Strict Haiku
Sponsored by Charles Henderson
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 11/24/2011 12:38:00 AM
PAULA, ;-) stopping by to wish you and everyone a happy THANKSGIVING! ENJOYED YOUR HAIKU,, `" Have yourself a wonderful and lovely holiday. God Bless,.. p.d.
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Date: 11/22/2011 5:00:00 PM
Excellent Paula! So jealous that you can do this form flawlessly :)
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Date: 11/21/2011 5:14:00 PM
Juicy Paula..i luv it :) xx
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Date: 11/20/2011 9:56:00 PM
you painted a beautiful picture in this haiku
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Date: 11/11/2011 11:51:00 AM
this makes me want to pick, and let the juice run down my chin! mmm !! ps...a big thank you for my placement in your contest, Paula. What a great word "being" to inspire many different roads! Thanks very much!
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Date: 11/10/2011 8:40:00 PM
beautiful lines of visual delight Paula.. good luck in the contest .. thankxx for your choosing my Superb Being for one of your winners tonight.. this write meant much to me as your theme prodded my creative juices very much.. thankxx for inspiration and honor of winning luv.. much appreciated ...
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Date: 11/5/2011 9:45:00 PM
Awesome, Paula.
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Date: 11/5/2011 9:29:00 PM
WOW! LOVE IT PAULA,,, THE BEST COMES TO HE OR SHE THAT WAITS WITH PATIENTS... GOOD LUCK IN THE SONTEST,..P.D.
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Date: 11/5/2011 6:35:00 PM
Cleverly written! I'm sure you will do well in the contest!! Supremely done!!
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Date: 11/5/2011 3:21:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Sara
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