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Waiting On You

We all have our way of thinking But one truth shines through We all deny the wishing That all the lies are true We all believe in something worth dying for 6ft from the top and still waiting on you While your dragging on that 80 proof Then you claw me in to the tie Getting what I’ve been wishing for this night Can we deny the truth And the accident we went through Though I thought that I was gone No way back from were I’m from I know that I always wanted you 6ft from the top and still waiting on you While your dragging on that 80 proof Kissing and holding you more and more Till my conscience I abhor We are just beginning Give me the chance to keep it living

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/30/2008 6:57:00 AM
AWWWWWW!!!!! Its so deep and adorable. . I love IT!! Love Your Friend Alexz
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Date: 12/29/2008 7:07:00 PM
I thought this was awesome the rhyming seemed effortless. On that one stand a lone line, I think you meant "dying" not "dyeing" that's it actually, this really sounded like a song, I loved it. Blessings, ~Michaela~
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