Waiting On You

We all have our way of thinking
But one truth shines through
We all deny the wishing
That all the lies are true

We all believe in something worth dying for

6ft from the top and still waiting on you
While your dragging on that 80 proof 
Then you claw me in to the tie 
Getting what I’ve been wishing for this night

Can we deny the truth
And the accident we went through
Though I thought that I was gone
No way back from were I’m from 
I know that I always wanted you

6ft from the top and still waiting on you
While your dragging on that 80 proof
 Kissing and holding you more and more
Till my conscience I abhor 
We are just beginning
Give me the chance to keep it living
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Matheny Avatar
December 30, 2008 at 6:57 AM
AWWWWWW!!!!! Its so deep and adorable. . I love IT!! Love Your Friend Alexz
Payne Avatar
December 29, 2008 at 7:07 PM
I thought this was awesome the rhyming seemed effortless. On that one stand a lone line, I think you meant "dying" not "dyeing" that's it actually, this really sounded like a song, I loved it. Blessings, ~Michaela~
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