Waiting On a Goodbye

Gazing through an open and sunless window,
this lonely poet admires the Autumn's auburn scenery;
ravens, shallows and sparrows gather on the faded lawn...
waiting on a goodbye I can't approve without tears or melancholy. 


My sorrow will flee swifter than their speed,
and although their journey will be brief, I will grieve
by watching their nests tossed by the fierce wind with a loud cry;
o sad and shivering creatures, sing me your last song as I wait on your goodbye!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Quigley Avatar
January 6, 2012 at 1:46 PM
Congratulations on your win Andrew.
Brown Avatar
January 6, 2012 at 7:08 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's "Any 2011 Poem" contest Andrew. Love, Carol
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October 25, 2011 at 8:57 PM
I liked the melancholy feeling that really came out from this piece. Lovely!
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