Waiting On a Fool

a concrete heart waiting in ebony night on winged-flight, softening in calm's dreamy thought. One grain of sand becomes a glistening pearl, over the years, an aging restlessness wrought in moonlit tides and cyclic wave-drenched hours. Harsh winds have blown smooth and soft breezes cool. Then across hands of time, shades of dawn unfurl, waiting until the sun sets on a fool. He who loves with fury, unabandoned. The man who names his own waking despair. The one called a fool, a true dying breed. He waits for beauty and passion without care. One glistening pearl waiting amongst grains of sand. An artist's gem uncovered from the hardened land.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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August 2, 2012 at 12:22 AM
rondaha... Congratulations with your awesome win in Susan's waiting contest... what a WAIT..lol ;-) ~xox PD
Brown Avatar
August 1, 2012 at 1:54 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Susan's "Wait" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
July 31, 2012 at 9:06 AM
congrats Rhonda on a splendid write and win for this amazing poetry luv..
Onclaud Avatar
July 31, 2012 at 7:36 AM
such beauty with depth, rhonda... kudos to you for the well-deswerved award!..:)huggs
Arowolo Avatar
July 31, 2012 at 6:14 AM
Splendid!An excellent write,Rhonda.Congratulations on your superb win....
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
July 31, 2012 at 1:22 AM
Congratulations Rhonda on another well deserved win xx
Rozario Avatar
July 31, 2012 at 12:11 AM
Such an awesome write Rhonda...many congrats on your win...enjoyed!!!
Ruebel Avatar
July 30, 2012 at 2:46 PM
Wow! Love this one...Congratulations on your win Rhonda-Well done.......... As Always, Shar
Williams Avatar
July 30, 2012 at 2:37 PM
Rhonda congrats on your win, just lovely...David
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July 21, 2012 at 6:40 AM
Rhonda, this is a beautiful written poem. - Take care and have a lovely weekend. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Williams Avatar
July 21, 2012 at 2:01 AM
don't wait too long though...David
Kearley Avatar
July 20, 2012 at 11:53 PM
Very nice,Rhonda! :o)
Merryman Avatar
July 20, 2012 at 7:49 PM
A beautiful write, Rhonda! Hope all is well with you. Love, Kim
Sivey Avatar
July 20, 2012 at 6:45 PM
This is a very meaningful write Rhonda! The message is truly wonderful and puts me in delight! The fool wins nothing for his troubles, only a dead end! Great Work!!
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