Waiting In Vain

"Waiting in Vain" all my life I've been waiting to capture the illusive brass ring to fill my heart with happiness; to lace my hands with bling. years have passed and still I wait for the rainbow's pot of gold to seal my fate and heal my soul with love to have and hold. time has escaped before my eyes as I wait for the silver lining to chase away all my cares beyond the woodbine twining. waiting for envisioned dreams to at last materialize from make-believe to reality where dreams wait to survive. in deeper thoughts of yesterday I crave my wishing well would soon erupt into new songs of life not magic spells. now I pace upon my porch; my rocker waits for me to sit and simply wait in vain for things I'd hoped 'twould be ...
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A  Avatar
March 13, 2014 at 2:08 AM
Deeply writ ten ~Love you forever my bff....... RIP Sweet Linda-Marie ~SKAT~
A   Avatar
August 23, 2012 at 9:19 PM
another nice win,,my bff.... hope you are well..always...pd
Gooden Avatar
August 22, 2012 at 6:21 AM
Congrats on your win, Linda.
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
August 21, 2012 at 8:15 PM
Congrats on another deserving win, Linda-Marie! I remember this poem and still can't imagine you retiring to a rocker, though I'm sure many can relate. I imagine you as more of a dream chaser than a passive dream catcher. You inspire with words... love and blessings :))
Grisetti Avatar
August 21, 2012 at 3:16 PM
A wonderful poem, but don't just sit and wait - write:)
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
August 21, 2012 at 8:06 AM
Many congratulations on your win xx
Brown Avatar
August 21, 2012 at 5:43 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "#198" contest Linda-Marie. Love, Carol
Wright Avatar
August 20, 2012 at 8:53 PM
I can relate! Great poem!! Congrats on your honorable mention!
Dietrich Avatar
August 20, 2012 at 7:54 PM
wonderful poem and wonderful win, dearie. BIG congrats. It's so difficult to win in Brian's contest and this one was deserving of it.
Ryerson Avatar
August 20, 2012 at 2:58 PM
Wonderful couplet you've written here, Linda...really tugged at my heartstrings...congratulations on your win in Brian's contest...have a great day! - Tim
A   Avatar
August 2, 2012 at 12:18 AM
linda... Congratulations with your awesome win in Susan's waiting contest... what a WAIT..lol ;-) ~xox PD
Brown Avatar
August 1, 2012 at 1:52 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Susan's "Wait" contest Linda-MarieLove, Carol
Arowolo Avatar
August 1, 2012 at 7:36 AM
Wonderful and fantastic write,Linda.Beautiful and thought provoking piece.Great job,my friend. Congratulations on your super win.well deserved luv.kudos to you.
Kendrick Avatar
July 31, 2012 at 11:32 AM
((()))Congrats on your creative winning work..Sara
Sweetheart Avatar
July 31, 2012 at 8:58 AM
WON 2nd place .. thankxxx..
Onclaud Avatar
July 31, 2012 at 7:27 AM
and high you go with this impressive write... sweet congrats on your grreat win luv..:) huggs
May Avatar
July 31, 2012 at 6:55 AM
lovely write Linda...congrats on your win
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
July 31, 2012 at 1:16 AM
Congratulations Linda Marie xx
Rozario Avatar
July 30, 2012 at 11:55 PM
Congrats on your wonderful win Linda Marie...enjoyed your poem.
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
July 30, 2012 at 5:19 PM
A lovely and most poignant write. We all have dreams we wait for...congrats on your wonderful win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
Ruebel Avatar
July 30, 2012 at 2:41 PM
Hello hon, Congratulations on your win, this is a most beautiful write my dear..... All my love, Shar
Williams Avatar
July 30, 2012 at 2:33 PM
Linda-Marie congrats on your win, hope you are comfy in that rocker...David
Johnson Avatar
July 30, 2012 at 2:00 PM
I know you have already grabbed the brass ring, Linda Marie but this is well written and exciting and congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Horne Avatar
July 21, 2012 at 11:24 AM
I love this sad write, my friend - and very glad to know with you that it's fictional
Wellington Avatar
July 19, 2012 at 6:14 PM
LM...this is a poem of unfulfilled hope and dreams...tells well your "Wait" in vain. Love it and good luck in the contest as this is a winner. One love. Joy Wells
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