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Waiting In Vain

"Waiting in Vain" all my life I've been waiting to capture the illusive brass ring to fill my heart with happiness; to lace my hands with bling. years have passed and still I wait for the rainbow's pot of gold to seal my fate and heal my soul with love to have and hold. time has escaped before my eyes as I wait for the silver lining to chase away all my cares beyond the woodbine twining. waiting for envisioned dreams to at last materialize from make-believe to reality where dreams wait to survive. in deeper thoughts of yesterday I crave my wishing well would soon erupt into new songs of life not magic spells. now I pace upon my porch; my rocker waits for me to sit and simply wait in vain for things I'd hoped 'twould be ...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/13/2014 2:08:00 AM
Deeply writ ten ~Love you forever my bff....... RIP Sweet Linda-Marie ~SKAT~
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Date: 8/23/2012 9:19:00 PM
another nice win,,my bff.... hope you are well..always...pd
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Date: 8/22/2012 6:21:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Linda.
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Date: 8/21/2012 8:15:00 PM
Congrats on another deserving win, Linda-Marie! I remember this poem and still can't imagine you retiring to a rocker, though I'm sure many can relate. I imagine you as more of a dream chaser than a passive dream catcher. You inspire with words... love and blessings :))
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Date: 8/21/2012 3:16:00 PM
A wonderful poem, but don't just sit and wait - write:)
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Date: 8/21/2012 8:06:00 AM
Many congratulations on your win xx
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Date: 8/21/2012 5:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "#198" contest Linda-Marie. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/20/2012 8:53:00 PM
I can relate! Great poem!! Congrats on your honorable mention!
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Date: 8/20/2012 7:54:00 PM
wonderful poem and wonderful win, dearie. BIG congrats. It's so difficult to win in Brian's contest and this one was deserving of it.
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Date: 8/20/2012 2:58:00 PM
Wonderful couplet you've written here, Linda...really tugged at my heartstrings...congratulations on your win in Brian's contest...have a great day! - Tim
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Date: 8/2/2012 12:18:00 AM
linda... Congratulations with your awesome win in Susan's waiting contest... what a WAIT..lol ;-) ~xox PD
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Date: 8/1/2012 1:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Susan's "Wait" contest Linda-MarieLove, Carol
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Date: 8/1/2012 7:36:00 AM
Wonderful and fantastic write,Linda.Beautiful and thought provoking piece.Great job,my friend. Congratulations on your super win.well deserved luv.kudos to you.
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Date: 7/31/2012 11:32:00 AM
((()))Congrats on your creative winning work..Sara
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Date: 7/31/2012 8:58:00 AM
WON 2nd place .. thankxxx..
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Date: 7/31/2012 7:27:00 AM
and high you go with this impressive write... sweet congrats on your grreat win luv..:) huggs
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Date: 7/31/2012 6:55:00 AM
lovely write Linda...congrats on your win
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Date: 7/31/2012 1:16:00 AM
Congratulations Linda Marie xx
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Date: 7/30/2012 11:55:00 PM
Congrats on your wonderful win Linda Marie...enjoyed your poem.
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Date: 7/30/2012 5:19:00 PM
A lovely and most poignant write. We all have dreams we wait for...congrats on your wonderful win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 7/30/2012 2:41:00 PM
Hello hon, Congratulations on your win, this is a most beautiful write my dear..... All my love, Shar
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Date: 7/30/2012 2:33:00 PM
Linda-Marie congrats on your win, hope you are comfy in that rocker...David
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Date: 7/30/2012 2:00:00 PM
I know you have already grabbed the brass ring, Linda Marie but this is well written and exciting and congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/21/2012 11:24:00 AM
I love this sad write, my friend - and very glad to know with you that it's fictional
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Date: 7/19/2012 6:14:00 PM
LM...this is a poem of unfulfilled hope and dreams...tells well your "Wait" in vain. Love it and good luck in the contest as this is a winner. One love. Joy Wells
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