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Waiting Got Me

Bitter wind bites at my skin Blowing my hair around with air Standing i freeze, waiting for he Snow past my feet, i quake in the breeze Rubbing my arms this cold is setting off alarms Where is he at? When is he comming at last? Ah, there i see, he's walking towards me I smile at him, waiting a few more seconds I take his hands in mine and one kiss slows time he opens his eyes, but its not my guy hello he smiles, he'd been walking for miles my eyes look scared, not sure what had just happened here a van comes up, and picks us up i try to excape but he wont let me away he covers my mouth with a cloth that smells my eyes roll back, the world goes black im gone i think, but the man winks i wake up sore, in another world im dressed in new cloths, where they came from i wouldnt know chained to the wall, i can barely call im his new wife, for the rest of my life kidnaped by he, why didnt i see past the snow that did blow check his face before i ran to his place before i kissed him so sweet, standing in the street made sure he was my boy first, before he fell in love waiting for my boyfriend in the street, drug me into this keep i just thought of this randomly...idk lol tell me what you think

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Date: 10/31/2012 1:32:00 PM
Makes me think of being abducted by evil - I like the continuity and length of the write Jay - I adore Winter and it's pain, I so glad its on the way now, unstoppable, unnegotiable - such a true metaphor about kissing slowing time - J.A.B. %
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