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Waiting For You

During the rainy season,under the tree,
I was sitting on the stone near the sea.
With opened hair and glittering eye,
I looked at the moon,up high in the sky.
Just then the tear flowed down my cheek,
Aah!my life has become a damn freak.
I closed my eyes n saw u,
I wanted to say I want to hear something from u.
But I realized…
During the rainy season,under the tree,
I was sitting on the stone near the sea.
Just then a cold breeze blewed,
I smiled and turned back,thought It would b u..
But Alas!
Green bushes and tall trees were all that I cud see,
Days and night I kept waiting for Thee…

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Skat A Date: 6/27/2015 1:32:00 AM Hi Zainab, Congratulations on having your poem featured this past week. SKAT love Login to Reply Zainab Rasool Date: 6/29/2015 11:36:00 PM Thank you ma'am ??

Scott Thirtyseven Date: 6/25/2015 8:19:00 AM I found this poem at the top of the Home Page. Congrats on the placement. I love the sentiment that you have expressed here. Though personally I like to see the whole word. I'll be back to check out more. Login to Reply Zainab Rasool Date: 6/25/2015 11:26:00 AM thankyou so much mr.scoot its my pleasure u read my poem... :-)

Constance La France Date: 6/24/2015 8:45:00 AM Zainab, congratulations on having this moving poem selected as a Feature Poem for the week, well done and enjoy the honor Login to Reply Zainab Rasool Date: 6/25/2015 11:37:00 AM Thankyou so much..... i m glad that my poem is been selected for featured poem.

Skat A Date: 5/27/2015 6:40:00 PM Zainab, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT Login to Reply Zainab Rasool Date: 6/21/2015 1:16:00 PM hello skat its nice to meet u :) and tons of thanks for giving your precious time for reading my poems i am so glad to here this :)

Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/27/2015 5:05:00 PM Zainab, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@ Login to Reply Zainab Rasool Date: 6/21/2015 1:18:00 PM hello mis Linda thnku for your support :)

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/27/2015 4:13:00 AM - Welcome to P Soup, Zainab :) - Most arts demands training (we learn from each other), for me it is important to share and delight others - Thank you for choosing to share your poems here with us - I wish you good luck: ) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Zainab Rasool Date: 6/21/2015 1:17:00 PM hello anne lise its so sweet of you for your support and i am glad that you are reading my poems :)