Waiting For You

Never did I entertain such a dark outcome in the pursuit of my dream with you. I held you so dear, my trust in you so deep harbored such high regard and I watched you part screamed inside had to let you decide felt tied, chained by the word that I knew and my eyes wouldn't, yet couldn't turn away. I could have killed him with my bare hands but couldn't let defeat enter my dream, now my sorrow so complete. And I wait, like a breath of fresh air inside the recess of your mind, and I wait Like a spring scented air that blows softly inside your heart, for the day, long awaited of your return. © 09.21.12
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Tacito Avatar
October 8, 2012 at 8:31 AM
Damn, I understand this feeling. Love shall overcome. The ending hit me quite personally. Excellent job!
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October 2, 2012 at 8:08 PM
Ummm...Okay! I confess!... I got a SERIOUS crush on you too!..That smile of yours makes me week in the knees...Are you married? If not, I'm sure some lucky guy has already swept you off your feet....Mercy me, what am I DOING??...I'm gonna hate myself in the morning!...
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October 2, 2012 at 7:49 PM
Caroline Cecile Delacroix!...Where the heck have you been?... Were you here all the time and I just over-looked you?? Please don't take offense...but this poem and the other ones I read are FAR different (and much more compelling) than what you've been posting on Facebook!...So glad to be back in touch, my good friend! - Tim
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October 1, 2012 at 3:29 PM
This is an exquisite, well written poem, Caroline...in times like these we have to reach deep within to find the strength to look beyond our hurt ! Love, Annalise
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October 1, 2012 at 1:52 PM
A lovely poem Caroline ... Positive and well written. oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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October 1, 2012 at 12:00 PM
Today is the start of a new month and a new week. I am reading what looks to be some exceptional writing today. So glad I was able to read yours Caroline. Love, Carol
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