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Waiting For the Shade

I traveled a thousand miles with memories,
of bellowing frogs and their serenade
and the flat stones we sat on,
that gave no comfort
Leaves from an oak brushed and filtered rays
from the moon, filling each curve and hollow 
of you
My eyes spoke every word,
yours answered with a smile
Twenty long years ago

The days counted between have ended
and the memory of you in a summer dress
stayed

I arrived late, the crowd had left,
their footprints visible in the freshly dug soil
The stone above your grave read
" SHE WAS A GIFT TO ALL "
Something I had said to you long ago
I planted an oak sapling where you lay
and then... said goodbye
I'll return one day, sit in the shade of this tree
and close my eyes,   to sleep

4/17/17 contest And Then
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Duncan Avatar
June 14, 2017 at 1:43 PM
congrats on your win,,,,,,,Love it :)
Inman Avatar
May 2, 2017 at 9:25 AM
Loved your poem Frederic.
Kimathi Avatar
April 27, 2017 at 7:18 AM
Very deep and beautiful at the same time..... Congrats Frederic, for your WIN in the contest!!! ;-)
White Avatar
April 27, 2017 at 1:28 AM
This beautiful poem, it gives me a feeling of sadness and peace the same time, and it's so beautifully written. Congratulations on your placement, it is more than well-earned. This one is special to me.
Lawless Avatar
April 26, 2017 at 9:21 PM
Frederic, that last couplet brings a sense of peacefulness into the closing. Thanks for entering the contest
Ogundare Avatar
April 18, 2017 at 4:39 PM
This is beautiful, Frederic. Good luck with the contest.
Green Avatar
April 18, 2017 at 4:36 PM
Frederic, though sad, this was beautifully peaceful feeling. You have taken these memories and allowed them to remind you only of the beauty. You poem will do the same thing for your readers.
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