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Waiting For the Right Sailor

wearing a gorgeous blue topaz necklace confiscated from the spoils of the Titanic a sultry siren blows watery smoke rings in the Atlantic waiting for a handsome naive sailor willing to follow her down the depths of despair where extra loot lies in wait

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Date: 6/5/2022 8:13:00 PM
Come into my parlour! I loved it all. I wonder how many sailors had followed her down the depths of despair before.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 6/5/2022 11:22:00 PM
Every single one of them probably.
Date: 6/5/2022 10:08:00 AM
Mysterious and full of imagery!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 6/5/2022 6:48:00 PM
Thank you Kim
Date: 6/5/2022 9:40:00 AM
Your images here are riveting, Caren. Very nice writing!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 6/5/2022 6:48:00 PM
Thank you Hank.
Date: 6/5/2022 2:56:00 AM
Nice one, Caren. Watery smoke rings… interesting image
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 6/5/2022 6:48:00 PM
I thought so Jeff

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