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Waiting For the Day Love Floats My Way

Waiting for the day love floats my way Hoping for one that is here to play So many gone by in the past The further it seems I have to cast Looking for love that won't surpass One that can fly without having to crash Giving it my all Really wanting to hear the right call Taking my time being sure not to fall tearing down this massive wall That has things coming to a crawl I'm in it for the long haul Breaking through this windfall Plunging forward wanting to recall A love that stands ten feet tall One that leads straight for fun That won't make us feel under the gun Something beautiful that feels like we have won Our eyes wide open Making sure I am scoping All the opportunities that I have awoken Hoping the next lady can see How much my love flows free That will help us define A love that will fall right in time One that I can keep as all mine A woman who is kind that wants to find That thrill that makes time stand still Making us both feel like this is the real deal Love that brings stars to our eyes That looks like a beautiful sunrise

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Date: 7/15/2018 5:52:00 PM
Hello Jack Cooper It seems we are looking for the same type of love. I hope that we both find it one day soon. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/16/2018 12:16:00 PM
Hello Jack it is easier said than done. We are both waiting for the right person to be in our lives. I hope we find it one day soon.
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Jack Cooper
Date: 7/15/2018 10:00:00 PM
Hello, Darlene thank you for your comments about my poem. I pray a good woman floats my way who wants such a love that I am willing to share but as you know it's much easier said than done have a wonderful day.Jack2
Date: 7/15/2018 9:03:00 AM
Hi Jack, I enjoyed reading this excellently written piece expressing a longing for love - the kind of love we all hope and pray for - the kind that makes us feel alive - the kind that is true and lasting! Well done, my friend, this is truly a romantic gem! Hugs and love. Pandita
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Jack Cooper
Date: 7/15/2018 11:59:00 AM
Thank you ever so kindly Pandita for your very sincere review of my poem you got it right all the above. Romantic gem hugs and lots of love right back at you.Jack2

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