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Waiting For Spring

An awakened Earth
Lovely March, April and May
Dormant seeds will thrive.

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Amy Green

Date: 5/1/2010 9:39:00 PM

I like!

Adell Foster

Date: 2/8/2010 8:40:00 AM

I can hardly wait for spring to appear, this is an excellent write presented in traditional haiku form. Thank you Kimberly for sharing the read. God Bless, Always, Adell

John Freeman

Date: 2/3/2010 9:00:00 AM

I waiting for the April showers to bring the May flowers Kimberly. Awesome spring Haiku. Sincerely, love, moses

Marty Owens

Date: 1/31/2010 3:13:00 PM

Wonderful Haiku...Very descriptive...Enjoyed...Marty

Brian Strand

Date: 1/31/2010 8:34:00 AM

They will indeed Kimberly and not a moment before their time.Rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words and welcome comments today

Gert W. Knop

Date: 1/31/2010 4:07:00 AM

Lovely Haiku you wrote here, Kimberly! It is good to know that spring is not far and that dormant seeds will thrive soon! Thank you for your friendly comment on Rescue of Dreams...Have a nice week ahead...Gert

Cecil Hickman

Date: 1/30/2010 11:55:00 PM

wonderfully written Haiku, and good luck in the contest, beautiful as the season,,and Thank you for reading and commenting upon my words and for your warmth within your words,,,Blessings..Cecil

Date: 1/30/2010 6:29:00 PM

I can't wait. It has been so cold here in North Dakota as of late. Like the feeling of hope this poem has. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/30/2010 4:43:00 PM

They are just waiting for a little warmth!! Can't wait!! Lovely poem

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/30/2010 4:35:00 PM

A sweet little spring poem, Kimberly. It's in the contest I hope? Good luck and thanks for reading my poems. Luv,Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/30/2010 4:30:00 PM

Lovely Haiku Kimberly and good luck if u entered in Carol's contest.. it has much appeal for a winning spot... thankxx so ver much for your special comments on my poetry reads tonight and your Spring poem has beautiful qualities that bring out u as a poet... my poems are no better than yours ..we are all different creative beings... I enjoy your writes very much.. thankxx again for your welcome back support.. so appreciative.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Jeralynn Clark

Date: 1/30/2010 3:38:00 PM

The beauty of it all! Nice! Jeralynn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/30/2010 3:29:00 PM

Soon and very soon it will be here. Nicely spoken.. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/30/2010 3:27:00 PM

You paint a welcome picture especially today when along the east coast so many people are at home because of snow. This enlivens our hope! Peace, Audrey

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