Waiting For Dusk

waiting for dusk
to show the moon's
intoxicating light
dawning
in your eyes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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August 20, 2013 at 7:18 PM
in the crystal vase arranging all the flowers it can hold no more room in me so filled am I with you Written for my wife who lost her battle with breast cancer. It was chosen as the love tanks by author Bruce Ross and included in his book: HOW TO HAIKU as an expample of a love tanks. I am very proud of this work. I wanted to share it with you knowing you would appreciate it. Bob
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August 20, 2013 at 7:14 PM
This coming from a thinker, a teacher, and if correct, a teacher of children is a wonderful thing for me to feel in your opinions. Not to brag or say I am special, yet all my works are not written by me, I can not take credit for any of my stuff. They come to me in seconds fully formed and they sometimes make me shake my head and say, I WROTE THAT? Often I would call MH editor Robert Spiess and say, ...I DIDN'T SEND YOU THIS AND HE WOULD ASSURE ME IT WAS I. -- I RESPECT YOUR OPINIONS. THANK YOU.
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