Waiting For a Response

Tell me how can I
shake your eloquent branches?
Make your fruitful words
fall to the ground where I wait,
hungry for your sweet or sour.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
March 11, 2012 at 12:29 AM
wow, I think this one I like even more because of the message behind it. love it.
Kearley Avatar
February 27, 2012 at 3:53 PM
With love... :o)
Rosser Avatar
February 29, 2012 at 2:24 PM
Thanks for this.
Thompson Avatar
February 27, 2012 at 1:35 PM
Patience is so hard and i think you hit the nail on the head, beautiful words :) Taylor
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February 29, 2012 at 2:24 PM
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