Waiting For a Departed Soul

Beside this shore I sit  awaiting  love,
from sweet departed soul which brings me pain,
I miss you more,despite you`ve left for long,
I gaze  at  sky expecting joy  above
to see your face and feel your touch again,
But,death rejects this dance for senseless song.





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November 12, 2013 at 10:01 AM
congratulations!
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November 10, 2013 at 11:12 PM
I knew this would be a winner! congrats my friend. BG
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November 10, 2013 at 6:10 AM
Enjoyed reading your creative winning work..Congrats..Sara
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November 9, 2013 at 6:15 PM
Yes, you have captured the essence of sadness of that picture. Congrats for your win.
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November 2, 2013 at 3:26 AM
Totally love this and i am also sure that this is the winning piece:)
Gorelick Avatar
November 1, 2013 at 9:32 PM
I love this...Winner here. BG
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November 1, 2013 at 7:36 PM
This is breathtaking...good luck in the contest...
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