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Waiting For a Departed Soul

Beside this shore I sit awaiting love, from sweet departed soul which brings me pain, I miss you more,despite you`ve left for long, I gaze at sky expecting joy above to see your face and feel your touch again, But,death rejects this dance for senseless song. CONTEST:"Senses of a Sestet" sponsored by Nette Onclaud.

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Date: 11/12/2013 10:01:00 AM
congratulations!
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Date: 11/10/2013 11:12:00 PM
I knew this would be a winner! congrats my friend. BG
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Date: 11/10/2013 6:10:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your creative winning work..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 11/9/2013 6:15:00 PM
Yes, you have captured the essence of sadness of that picture. Congrats for your win.
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Date: 11/2/2013 3:26:00 AM
Totally love this and i am also sure that this is the winning piece:)
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Date: 11/1/2013 9:32:00 PM
I love this...Winner here. BG
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Date: 11/1/2013 7:36:00 PM
This is breathtaking...good luck in the contest...
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