Waiting By the Window

Some say 
That this little girl live the perfect way
They say 
She don't have no trouble no worries
But they don't know what happens 
Behind close doors
How she feels so alone
How both her parents was on drugs
Momma got clean and
Daddy didn't care
He left them there
Said he had to go get more
He promised he was coming back
She waited by the window for him for 
Days,
Months,
Years
He was gone
So now she's 16 
She moved on
But some days
She can't help but
Wait by the window....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Loveless Avatar
April 8, 2009 at 11:14 AM
incredible, great job, sorry for your pain this is so sad. Love, Jese
Mason Avatar
December 24, 2008 at 3:12 PM
This is just an incredible write here, Breana!! The addict/alcoholic has no idea the damage they do to their families even to the point of passing addiction on genetically for some of us. This powerful write here is definitely a winner and Michael's contest was a great way for us to express our pain. Congratulations on your writing being selected!!
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December 22, 2008 at 1:09 PM
Such a sad story. Well delivered. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Michael's contest. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
Heck Avatar
December 22, 2008 at 12:14 PM
Dear Breana - Congratulations on your WIN in Michael's contest! Wishing you and your loved ones a Happy & Blessed holiday season. Peace always, John
Winter Avatar
December 22, 2008 at 5:58 AM
Congratulations Breana on your win in Michael's contest. Well deserved. Warmest wishes for a beautiful holiday season. Love, Shar
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December 22, 2008 at 1:12 AM
Congratulations, Breana, on your well deserved win in Michael's contest. Love, Nigel
Guzzi Avatar
December 16, 2008 at 12:40 PM
I can see why you responded to my "Father?" I'm 60 and occasionally these issues come back. My Dad was marreid 3 times & I have 2 brothers & a sister younger than me. Having to be the adult like you must have too so young will make you a much more capable person sooner. You are going to make it Breena. You are a special person as all your verses show. Happy Holy Days Debbie Guzzi
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December 14, 2008 at 7:10 PM
Tragic... so many children's lives are spoiled by parental indifference. A most poignant piece. Best wishes, Keith
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