Waiting

A -lmost time for us to leave for dinner at Rubens B -een almost thirty minuets since she went to get ready C -an there be something wrong in there? D -on’t know what she’s doing in the bathroom for so long E -ither she has an upset stomach or has fainted F -inally I see her coming down the stairs G -etting her wrap, worth the wait

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 2/26/2018 7:53:00 PM

Hello Carlos, this poem is beautifully written. Yes she was worth the wait..A poem you commented on.. When you said.:Happiness comes when we are not looking outside but inside,make sense to me. have a nice evening my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/27/2018 5:31:00 PM

I do harken to my inner self. have a nice evening my friend.

Lunita Blanca
Date: 2/26/2018 8:59:00 PM

You are indeed wise to harken to your inner self.

Solomon Ochwo-Oburu

Date: 2/18/2018 5:48:00 AM

I love your creative imagination, Carlos!

Lunita Blanca
Date: 2/26/2018 9:00:00 PM

Your comment makes me glad Solomon.