Lunita Blanca Poet ABC

Waiting

A -lmost time for us to leave for dinner at Rubens
B -een almost thirty minuets since she went to get ready
C -an there be something wrong in there?
D -on’t know what she’s doing in the bathroom for so long
E -ither she has an upset stomach or has fainted
F -inally I see her coming down the stairs
G -etting her wrap, worth the wait

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Darlene De Beaulieu February 26, 2018 at 7:53 PM Hello Carlos, this poem is beautifully written. Yes she was worth the wait..A poem you commented on.. When you said.:Happiness comes when we are not looking outside but inside,make sense to me. have a nice evening my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu February 27, 2018 at 5:31 PM I do harken to my inner self. have a nice evening my friend. Lunita Blanca February 26, 2018 at 8:59 PM You are indeed wise to harken to your inner self.

Solomon Ochwo-Oburu February 18, 2018 at 5:48 AM I love your creative imagination, Carlos! Lunita Blanca February 26, 2018 at 9:00 PM Your comment makes me glad Solomon.