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Waiting

Time clicks on, as I wait The hours pass, before my take Daylight ends and night descends Finds me, sitting, thinking, pacing, waiting. The night grows old So does my soul Yet still I wait Watching, staring, seeing, nothing. Night cries, silenced Another day begins When will all this anticipation end? The sun moves on Another day, gone Leaving me, still Wondering, wishing, hoping, for something.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/18/2016 11:43:00 AM
I personally think you have found what you are looking for. I see a lot of talent in your writing. A7
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Carlene Simpson
Date: 1/21/2016 7:09:00 AM
Thanks again Daniel.....I still think I need to work on writing different types of poetry, I'm use to just free styling.
Date: 1/15/2016 8:43:00 AM
Thanks to all the viewers; PLEASE let me know who you are. Make a comment, I'm new to Poetry Soup, so tell me what I'm doing right, what I'm lacking, or what I can improve on. All comments will be appreciated. Thank you.
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