Waiting

Waiting
For the end
To fall
And the beginning
To start.

Waiting
For the hope
To light
My heart, my soul
My will.
As the darkness
Is on its way
To establish
Its supremacy.

The fire in you
The fiery orange
Overshadowed
In remote
Wilderness
But
You're still
Waiting

Waiting
For the sun
To rain
And the rain
To shine.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Andresen Avatar
October 22, 2015 at 3:41 AM
- Hello M.O.L. :) - Autumn is a great time to write and read poems :) - I welcome you to the P - Soup, with your great first poem :) - Hope you will have a nice time here with us - Best wishes and good luck - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Nance Avatar
October 16, 2015 at 10:00 PM
I enjoyed this, the ending was very neat...welcome to ps
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October 16, 2015 at 9:12 PM
Music, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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October 16, 2015 at 6:07 PM
Nice poem, Music Of life, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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