Waiting

Waiting Your whole life. Tap, tap, tap. Time is precious. You treat it with such disrespect.

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Cheyenne Graves

Date: 10/6/2015 7:52:00 PM

wonderful poem time is very important and it goes by very fast. love how you captured what time really is.

Pat Davis
Date: 10/6/2015 7:56:00 PM

Thank you Cheyenne! I'm up there in years, it goes very fast! Pat

Pam Deremer

Date: 8/27/2015 10:06:00 PM

I think you are very good at taking a broad subject and getting it all put down in just a small amount of words. Good job!

Pat Davis
Date: 8/28/2015 10:39:00 AM

Thank you Pam! Very nice comment; makes me smile :) Pat

Christopher Goss

Date: 8/27/2015 5:28:00 PM

What is the value of time? What is worth the value of time? I believe life is good when we find value in even the small moments that we're tapping away on the keyboard. Like now. Thanks for sharing.

Pat Davis
Date: 8/27/2015 8:45:00 PM

Thanks for reading and the comment. I feel that each moment is a gift. I think you do too. Thank you for your thoughts! Pat