Waiting

Waiting

Your whole life.
Tap, tap, tap.
Time is precious.
You treat it with such disrespect.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Graves Avatar
October 6, 2015 at 7:52 PM
wonderful poem time is very important and it goes by very fast. love how you captured what time really is.
Davis Avatar
October 6, 2015 at 7:56 PM
Thank you Cheyenne! I'm up there in years, it goes very fast! Pat
Deremer Avatar
August 27, 2015 at 10:06 PM
I think you are very good at taking a broad subject and getting it all put down in just a small amount of words. Good job!
Davis Avatar
August 28, 2015 at 10:39 AM
Thank you Pam! Very nice comment; makes me smile :) Pat
Goss Avatar
August 27, 2015 at 5:28 PM
What is the value of time? What is worth the value of time? I believe life is good when we find value in even the small moments that we're tapping away on the keyboard. Like now. Thanks for sharing.
Davis Avatar
August 27, 2015 at 8:45 PM
Thanks for reading and the comment. I feel that each moment is a gift. I think you do too. Thank you for your thoughts! Pat
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