Waiting

Being your flower, butterflies lie on
loneliness fills you in me 
waiting long for those eyes 


Name: Jenny Jae
Contest Title: IN PRAISE OF A KIMO
Date of Poem: 2/20/2015
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lonelylonginglovekimo

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Skat A

January 22, 2016 at 7:48 PM

JENNY, HOPE TO SEE YOU BACK THIS YEAR. SKAT

Debra Squyres

March 19, 2015 at 10:42 AM

such a sad, mellowed tone to this kimo. Wonderfully written !! Congrats on your win !!

Casarah Nance

March 13, 2015 at 4:28 PM

Nicely done Jenny Grats on your contest placement :)

Jan Allison

March 13, 2015 at 7:51 AM

A beautifully penned kimo many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx

Poet Destroyer A

February 21, 2015 at 8:34 PM

Jenny, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to get through the year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

February 19, 2015 at 5:39 PM

Jenny, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT