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We walked together, arm in arm On this warm autumn's night. I hadn't known him very long, But oh, it seemed so right. He whispered sweet things in my ear, While my love kept growing. I pulled away from him and said "This romance needs slowing." And then we heard a whistle blow, His ship was leaving dock. He said ,"I leave you a kiss." While I stood there in shock. "A sailor's first love is the sea, With girls in every port". My loving parents cautioned me And I had no retort. So now you'll find me at the shore, On sunny days or drear, Just waiting for my sailor boy And his ship to appear. By: Joyce Johnson 9/7/14 The Poet 11 contest. "I leave your a kiss." Theme

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Date: 9/15/2014 7:53:00 AM
Congratulations Joyce..:) God bless us all..:)
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Date: 9/15/2014 1:45:00 AM
This was a unique piece of writing,, I was so impressed! Thank you and Congratulations on your win! hugs
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Date: 9/14/2014 10:52:00 PM
Congrats on the win, Joyce
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Date: 9/14/2014 7:09:00 PM
Congratulations Joyce. Such a sweet poem.
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Date: 9/14/2014 1:50:00 PM
touchingly romantic Joyce many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/8/2014 9:38:00 AM
This was a lovely rhyme Joyce. I dated a sailor once-once was all it took . Good luck in the contest. :-)
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