Waiting

We walked together, arm in arm
On this warm autumn's night.
I hadn't known him very long,
But oh, it seemed so right.

He whispered sweet things in my ear,
While my love kept growing.
I pulled away from him and said
"This romance needs slowing."

And then we heard a whistle blow,
His ship was leaving dock.
He said ,"I leave you a kiss."
While I  stood there in shock.

"A sailor's first love is the sea,
With girls in every port".
My loving parents cautioned me
And I had no retort.

So now you'll find me at the shore,
On sunny days or drear,
Just waiting for my sailor boy
And his ship to appear.

By: Joyce Johnson

9/7/14

The Poet 11 contest.  
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Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 7:53 AM
Congratulations Joyce..:) God bless us all..:)
Phookan Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 1:45 AM
This was a unique piece of writing,, I was so impressed! Thank you and Congratulations on your win! hugs
Mehta Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 10:52 PM
Congrats on the win, Joyce
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 7:09 PM
Congratulations Joyce. Such a sweet poem.
Allison Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 1:50 PM
touchingly romantic Joyce many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Costello Avatar
September 8, 2014 at 9:38 AM
This was a lovely rhyme Joyce. I dated a sailor once-once was all it took . Good luck in the contest. :-)
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