Waiting

It hasn't sprung yet,
the season of renewal.
A chill lingers still.



~~~~~  For Carol Brown's "Waiting For Spring" contest

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Skat A

April 5, 2010 at 4:31 PM

A wonderful haiku.

Farah Chamma

February 12, 2010 at 11:59 AM

A great write Sue... Your Haiku captured the essense =) PS: Did you send your ideas via soupmail? haha or did it reject them too? I haven't received anything...I hope there's nothing wrong with my soupmail, for I'm really more than excited to know what you think about these political issues... Always, farah

Brian Strand

February 9, 2010 at 11:53 PM

Like the forst line Sue.Rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words and comments today

Adell Foster

February 9, 2010 at 9:58 AM

Congrats on your win in Carol Brown's "Waiting For Spring" contest, this is an excellent haiku in imagery and form truly depicting the wait for season's change. I thank you for sharing the read and for your very kind comments. Many Blessings, Always, Adell

Debbie Guzzi

February 8, 2010 at 5:40 PM

Love it! Thanks for the blog comment. I hear you! I've been on a puzzle kick lately so I'm just viewing the form as a puzzle to solve LOL. I do LOVE Ballades though and Ballads are metered verse, if you don't rhyme the end words Taaaadddaaaaa you have Blank Verse (duck) Light & Love

Susan Palli

February 7, 2010 at 6:03 AM

excellent!

Andrea Dietrich

February 6, 2010 at 5:03 PM

good title for this one, it's JUST about here though. Congrats, Sue!!

Andrew Crisci

February 4, 2010 at 10:47 PM

Congratulations on your win in Carol's Waiting For Spring contest. I love your Haiku...it explains why spring hasn't arrived yet...a chill lingers in the air! This is such a wonderful statement! Enjoy your honor and may you have many more. My birthday date is this coming Saturday, February 6th. I thank you for your sharp eye: yes, there was a typo in my poem I have corrected it. Thanks again for your kindness, Sue. Have a wonderful weekend and may God bless you. Love and hugs, Andrew.

Deirdre Omaidin

February 4, 2010 at 4:23 AM

Beautiful haiku, very clever, full of expectation.Congrats. Thanks for comments on my piece. Déirdre

Brian Strand

February 4, 2010 at 12:20 AM

Congrats on your success Sue in the contest.Rgds Brian and thank you for your kind words and observations.

Carrie Richards

February 3, 2010 at 11:50 AM

Thank you Sue, for such a kind comment on my poem...it means a lot! ~love, Carrie And many thanks for being the "Birthday Well Wisher".....it is such a good thing you do! :)

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

February 2, 2010 at 11:31 PM

Very nice Haiku! Congrats on your success in Carol's contest. Best wishes, Caroline.

February 2, 2010 at 6:04 PM

Sue, I just wanted to stop by and add congratulations on your fifth place finish in Carol's contest to my other comment. I liked this the first time I read it. Enjoy your win! Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

Daver Austin

February 2, 2010 at 5:53 AM

Hey, Sue, I'm still waiting too. Great haiku! About a chap book. It's just a short book of (usually) poetry...no more than 50 pages. I have a printer, so I just print my stuff up for myself. I have a couple of good revues on "The Sibyl", a chap book on Greek themes, but, so far, no outside publication. 50th reunions are a blast. I had mine in 1997. Am I an old fart, or what? BIG LOVE, daver

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

February 1, 2010 at 4:29 PM

Sue, This is definitely a great haiku reminder... as it chills again even here in Florida. Good luck in Carol's contest. Thank you for your very kind comments on my work. I really felt good that you noticed how much writing I have done recently trying the various poetic forms. You have encouraged me to continue forward!!! (Even if it isn't a nice warm spring, yet.) Smiles, Dane

Sara Kendrick

February 1, 2010 at 4:16 PM

Great write that is true here right now even though the Forsythia blooms. Keep the creative pen flowing. Good luck in the contest. Sara

Farah Chamma

February 1, 2010 at 1:08 PM

A beautiful poem...conveys the anticipation very vividly... Always, Farah

Brian Strand

January 31, 2010 at 8:19 AM

Thank you for your welcome blog comments today Sue.Rgds Brian

Sara Lokken

January 31, 2010 at 8:12 AM

I feel you, physically and introspectively... Love*

Robert A. Dufresne

January 30, 2010 at 4:11 PM

Let you know when it heads up that way Sue. Still in the 70s here. When it gets in the 80s here to stay, you'll be getting your spring! Nice Haiku and thanks for your comment.- Good luck! Robert

John Loving Iii

January 30, 2010 at 9:18 AM

and yet a little while longer. john

Lena Townsend

January 28, 2010 at 7:07 AM

This piece speaks so much truth. Well penned. Great luck to you in the contest, Sue. Sending you many warm wishes and smiles from Lolita

Elaine George

January 27, 2010 at 9:34 AM

Freezing here today. Great Haiku, Sue. Best wishes in carol's contest. lainie

January 27, 2010 at 8:19 AM

Amen! We had winds around 50 miles and hour Monday with blowing snow. They cancelled schools. We already have enough snow to last us the whole winter and we haven't even hit February. OK! I'll stop. Just wanted to let you know I can really relate to your poem. I can't wait for spring! Fitting title for your poem. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen