Ghairo Daniels Poet Other

waiting

  w.   a. i. t. i. n. g. 

nights diss    ~~
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s  l  u   m    B  er 

2 wake
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STOP •______  to relearn

! lessons not perfect
             ED 

twilight calls bones

vacant 

                     SLOT or

SWOT       or

SLIT
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                                          q u i c  k l y

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                                LAKE
                                    
                 O~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~O 

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Paige Hind July 17, 2025 at 10:47 PM This is really cool, different turns in this, events, etc. I love it :)

Ink Empress July 12, 2025 at 7:54 AM Lessons not perfect true, youv delivered your thoughts do well in the form of open verse which is so well woven and delivered! I absolutely love the way youv arranged words too! And the descriptive nature of your lines! I think brian will love this! Best wishes beautiful soul! Sending you light always Ghairo Daniels July 13, 2025 at 7:14 PM Merci, south to south. I write better when not doing contests. Contests can be ego things & distracting. And we don’t know criteria used. Yes, the mind loves free/open form when it becomes more open. I perceive that the Greats would thumbs up open form as spacious. Lov ya.