waiting

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Paige Hind

Date: 7/17/2025 10:47:00 PM

This is really cool, different turns in this, events, etc. I love it :)

Ink Empress

Date: 7/12/2025 7:54:00 AM

Lessons not perfect true, youv delivered your thoughts do well in the form of open verse which is so well woven and delivered! I absolutely love the way youv arranged words too! And the descriptive nature of your lines! I think brian will love this! Best wishes beautiful soul! Sending you light always

Ghairo Daniels
Date: 7/13/2025 7:14:00 PM

Merci, south to south. I write better when not doing contests. Contests can be ego things & distracting. And we don’t know criteria used. Yes, the mind loves free/open form when it becomes more open. I perceive that the Greats would thumbs up open form as spacious. Lov ya.