Waiting

Mountains crumble no more to be 
Oceans of woe since you left me 
Thunder rolls and my heart it breaks 
Humbly life ends, my soul it quakes 
Everlasting grief with no mend  
Reminds me daily, it will not bend

Inconceivable, this pain I bear

My love's not gone, together we'll share 
In lasting glory at Jesus' feet 
Serenity and grace, oh how sweet 
Salvation unites on heaven's shore

Yesterday's gone, tomorrow brings more 
Only a moment in time we wait 
Until we meet at heaven's gate

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 4/8/2011 9:03:00 AM
A nice write. You may want to check out this link http://olusegun.poetrycraze.com/i_wait-13976.html This person has an account on this site as well. Contact me if you want more information. Steve
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Date: 12/22/2009 3:18:00 PM
Congratulations on being a first round survivor and the best to you in the finals Kanzazy. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/21/2009 9:11:00 AM
Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/20/2009 10:23:00 AM
Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James
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Date: 11/8/2009 12:14:00 PM
A very masterful poem Kanzazy. Certainly worthy ot the feature presentation, enjoyed the read, Sincerely, love, Moses
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Date: 11/7/2009 7:12:00 AM
Great poem...love it.
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Date: 11/2/2009 1:00:00 PM
Many congratulations on your poem being featured this week >> James
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Date: 11/2/2009 11:37:00 AM
Nice use of rhyme to share an inspirational message with us. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 11/2/2009 9:54:00 AM
Beautiful write, so much emotion. Congratulations on being featured.
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Date: 11/2/2009 3:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Kanzazy. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/2/2009 11:58:00 AM
I have enjoyed reading your splendid poetry today Kanzazy.Thank you for sharing it here at PoetrySoup, where you have become an asset to the site and to us other poets as well. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/2/2009 12:42:00 AM
Beautiful images.. God Bless, Dima
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