Waiting

The snow man stands deadpan under the faint
Glow of the lamp, his scarf damp as snowflakes
Fall ‘round him, the land grim--isn’t it quaint?

The fake smile--what guile!--who would smile like that?
Made to suffer, with a muffler, he shakes
As cold wind rolls almost toppling his hat.

I remember one November day when
You made me wait ‘neath a tree. My heart breaks
‘Coz I’ve been in that scene waiting since then.

October 24, 2024
Baguio City, Philippines
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Agustin Avatar
October 24, 2024 at 2:04 PM
Thanks for sharing your talent, Kabayan. Thanks likewise for your comment. Let's trust God to keep us safe always. God bless you.
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