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Waiting

Waiting for a beam of light to shine on window pane Wishing for a breath of air to whisk away the haze Hoping every moment for a lessening of rain Believing any second you will fall into my gaze The stars above do glisten like the twinkle in your eyes And wind does blow as steadily as pounds the blood in me Desire builds beneath my breast like forest mountains rise Atop the peak of love sustained is where I long to be Step into the clearing, my elusive wanderer Bring to me the company I cherish and adore Come and lay beside me now, my one heart's conqueror Stay, that I may wait and wish and hope and pine no more

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/23/2009 11:43:00 AM
Wonderfully visual. . . thank you, I enjoyed this one. :-)
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Date: 2/9/2009 5:06:00 PM
I like your imagination that is what I put into poetic words that say alot. Very heart felt. Thanks for commenting on one of my poems. nice write, Donna Angela Marie Yousef
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Date: 1/29/2009 1:47:00 PM
Donna, you have captured that feeling of waiting so beautifully here. To pine for your love to come, not easy. Excellent job! Thank you so much for your thoughtful comment, my sister in writing! Love, Robin
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Date: 1/28/2009 11:04:00 AM
Hello and creative poetry, love how the words just flow and come together for a beautiful poetry. Also thank you for your kind comments as well, and have a blessed day.
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Date: 1/28/2009 10:54:00 AM
this is simply beautiful, so romantic and heartfelt thank you for sharing this wonderful piece here with us on the soup and thanks to you for your kind comment on my poem, it's so appreciated
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Date: 1/28/2009 8:01:00 AM
Lovely, and longing....well done, Donna! Sweet words of love! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 1/28/2009 6:43:00 AM
Beautiful verse..so much love flowing through the piece..your words paints the picture so well. Great job.
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Date: 1/28/2009 5:24:00 AM
This write has so much passion, which is detailed greatly by the reference to nature and the clarity therein. A marvelous flowing piece. Very well written. Michael
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Date: 1/28/2009 3:46:00 AM
Nice Verse Donna. Tyler
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