Donna Golden Poet Verse

Waiting

Waiting for a beam of light to shine on window pane
Wishing for a breath of air to whisk away the haze
Hoping every moment for a lessening of rain
Believing any second you will fall into my gaze

The stars above do glisten like the twinkle in your eyes
And wind does blow as steadily as pounds the blood in me
Desire builds beneath my breast like forest mountains rise
Atop the peak of love sustained is where I long to be

Step into the clearing, my elusive wanderer
Bring to me the company I cherish and adore
Come and lay beside me now, my one heart's conqueror
Stay, that I may wait and wish and hope and pine no more

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Gerry Mattia April 23, 2009 at 11:43 AM Wonderfully visual. . . thank you, I enjoyed this one. :-)

Angela Yousef February 9, 2009 at 5:06 PM I like your imagination that is what I put into poetic words that say alot. Very heart felt. Thanks for commenting on one of my poems. nice write, Donna Angela Marie Yousef

Robin L. Gass January 29, 2009 at 1:47 PM Donna, you have captured that feeling of waiting so beautifully here. To pine for your love to come, not easy. Excellent job! Thank you so much for your thoughtful comment, my sister in writing! Love, Robin

Derrick Burton January 28, 2009 at 11:04 AM Hello and creative poetry, love how the words just flow and come together for a beautiful poetry. Also thank you for your kind comments as well, and have a blessed day.

Sandy Schermerhorn January 28, 2009 at 10:54 AM this is simply beautiful, so romantic and heartfelt thank you for sharing this wonderful piece here with us on the soup and thanks to you for your kind comment on my poem, it's so appreciated

Carrie Richards January 28, 2009 at 8:01 AM Lovely, and longing....well done, Donna! Sweet words of love! ~ Love, Carrie

Christopher Higgins January 28, 2009 at 6:43 AM Beautiful verse..so much love flowing through the piece..your words paints the picture so well. Great job.

Michael Degenhardt January 28, 2009 at 5:24 AM This write has so much passion, which is detailed greatly by the reference to nature and the clarity therein. A marvelous flowing piece. Very well written. Michael

Tyler Martin January 28, 2009 at 3:46 AM Nice Verse Donna. Tyler