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Waiting

Invisible to the eyes
Waiting bird cries
Nestled green and brown
Mommy shot down

Honorable Mention: Brian Strand-Quatro Your Four Line-11/1920

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Sara Kendrick

November 23, 2020 at 10:53 PM

Congrats on your placement. Some birds mate for life and they show it in their relationship to each other and they care for their young so lovingly. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Susan Ashley

November 23, 2020 at 7:57 PM

Indeed! Though invisible, the suffering is real and unfortunately, will continue unless a drastic change in perspective occurs. Congratulations, Frances, on your wonderful win in Brian's contest.. ~Susan