Waiting

Invisible to the eyes
Waiting bird cries
Nestled green and brown
Mommy shot down

Honorable Mention: Brian Strand-Quatro Your Four Line-11/1920

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 11/23/2020 10:53:00 PM
Congrats on your placement. Some birds mate for life and they show it in their relationship to each other and they care for their young so lovingly. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 11/23/2020 7:57:00 PM
Indeed! Though invisible, the suffering is real and unfortunately, will continue unless a drastic change in perspective occurs. Congratulations, Frances, on your wonderful win in Brian's contest.. ~Susan
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Date: 11/19/2020 4:45:00 PM
ah so sad. Congrats on the HM, Frances
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Date: 11/19/2020 6:51:00 AM
Hi Frances, The image is so sad! Congratulations on your win. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 11/18/2020 10:27:00 AM
Very sad ..
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Frances Schiavina
Date: 11/20/2020 4:52:00 PM
Intent of poem: Flash a light on extent of hidden suffering caused by violence before cruelty of brother against brother breaks out.
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