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Waiting

Invisible to the eyes Waiting bird cries Nestled green and brown Mommy shot down Honorable Mention: Brian Strand-Quatro Your Four Line-11/1920

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/23/2020 10:53:00 PM

Congrats on your placement. Some birds mate for life and they show it in their relationship to each other and they care for their young so lovingly. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Susan Ashley

Date: 11/23/2020 7:57:00 PM

Indeed! Though invisible, the suffering is real and unfortunately, will continue unless a drastic change in perspective occurs. Congratulations, Frances, on your wonderful win in Brian's contest.. ~Susan

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/19/2020 4:45:00 PM

ah so sad. Congrats on the HM, Frances

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/19/2020 6:51:00 AM

Hi Frances, The image is so sad! Congratulations on your win. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Silent One

Date: 11/18/2020 10:27:00 AM

Very sad ..

Frances Schiavina
Date: 11/20/2020 4:52:00 PM

Intent of poem: Flash a light on extent of hidden suffering caused by violence before cruelty of brother against brother breaks out.