Waiting

Cold Frozen Snow and Ice On everything Slippery to walk Insulating the ground Winter has brought a stillness With skies the color of slate gray For now, the creation is frozen Spring waits to be reborn another day Heidi sands 12/30/18

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Phil Capitano

Date: 12/30/2018 7:24:00 AM

A lovely etheree Heidi to fill a winter's morn with the hope of spring just around the corner. Good job.

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/30/2018 7:26:00 AM

Thank you Phil. On days like these, I dream about Spring :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/30/2018 7:22:00 AM

Cold, frozen, snowy, and ice..that says it all ..sometimes fun to watch..but sometimes dull and gray. Yes--lets jump ahead to Spring. I must say..we are having great 45-50 degree days here in Maryland.

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/30/2018 7:24:00 AM

Hi Vijay. Yes, you are right. It can be fun to watch and then these certain days, very gray! I kind of dread the coldest time coming before Spring. Spring is my favorite season! Wow! Enjoy the 50 degree day ! Thank you :)