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Patient Hope is on a stoic decline The celluloid tread mill is crybaby set on an aorta sob incline — A cardio faithless, vertical whine Shouldering the weight of personal decisions, is seen nowadays as an irresponsible, bulimic activity Cares of the world will surely take an unkind toll on the body and soul Lust obesity trick imagery is a mirror mirage of illusory, measured wait loss But how much wasted time in your slouch sofa life did it cost? For a slimmer waistline, Vanity became your sin slave boss Phat pocket dreams binge bought on a lottery coin toss Puffed up pride made you take a wait loss Virtuous self-denial sacrifices is a lost art — an unpracticed part of flabby moral muscle shedding Taut bellies of bloated importance (attained through artificial, sweaty palm wait loss) is a self-absorbed sin of indulgence Rash prayers desiring rushed results, be a twig spandex figure uncertainty marred by obese doubt And discarding of the necessary, healthy heft of navel faith is a wait loss ... Unnatural mental womb aerobics, that an anorexic spirit chose to exercise at a flatline metabolic rate

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Date: 10/14/2018 4:44:00 PM
A lot to read into with this one Freddie. Well done :)
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Date: 10/14/2018 2:11:00 PM
Powerful words my friend... you write about life and reality so well..
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Date: 10/14/2018 1:48:00 PM
"Shouldering the weight of personal decisions, is seen nowadays as an irresponsible, bulimic activity"; this would certainly seem true. "Unnatural mental womb aerobics, that an anorexic spirit chose to exercise at a flatline metabolic rate"; love that ending. Well done.
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