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Wait For Me

When I was young I had a little sis. She was dainty like any little miss. She thought I was strong and could always do Whatever she needed - I thought so, too. I could hear her say "Wait - wait for me, Roy!" But there ain't no "wait" in a young cowboy . So I rode my stickhorse into the sun And chased the bad guys 'til the day was done. She'd be waitin' right there by the gate, "Did you get'em ? Ya send'em to their fate?" There's no bigger fan that my little sis, I was always perfect, nothing amiss. The years passed by and I rode a real hoss. My sis got married and I felt the loss For she was much more than I ever knew. I found women like her were mighty few. Now that I'm older and things are more clear, She's top of the list of things I hold dear. I'd turn the clock back just to be that boy, And to hear her say "Wait - wait for me, Roy!" August 23, 2016 For Contest 5 Rhyming Stanzas - 5 only

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Date: 9/10/2016 5:31:00 PM
great poem
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Date: 8/30/2016 11:51:00 AM
I can relate to this poem, beingan older brother myself. Very well written story. Congratulations on your win.
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 8/30/2016 6:58:00 PM
Thanks, Jesse
Date: 8/29/2016 4:26:00 PM
Larry, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful poem ~
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 8/29/2016 9:14:00 PM
Thank you for the opportunity and the placement. Lots of fun..Larry
Date: 8/29/2016 2:52:00 PM
Sibling love is priceless and so is your emotional poem.Congrats Larry!
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 8/29/2016 3:03:00 PM
Thank you, Sara!!..Larry
Date: 8/29/2016 12:03:00 PM
Congratulations Larry, another winner....
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 8/29/2016 1:32:00 PM
Thank you, Charlie!!
Date: 8/29/2016 10:47:00 AM
Hi Larry, I really enjoyed this piece. It was lovely heartfelt tribute piece to your sister. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 8/29/2016 1:33:00 PM
Thank you, Alexis...So glad you enjoyed it!..Larry
Date: 8/29/2016 10:02:00 AM
This is absolutely wonderful...this brings tears to my eyes thinking of my only bro and pranks. He later got so entangled in his own world and our's stand no more! Congrats, my favorite,Sunita.
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 8/29/2016 1:35:00 PM
Thank you, Sunita!! I am pleased that the poem takes you to wonderful times with your brother...Larry
Date: 8/23/2016 10:20:00 PM
this is such a sad write Larry, i love it, almost in tears here mate, wow. a 7 for sure.
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 8/23/2016 10:24:00 PM
Thank you so much, Lewis. Glad you liked it..Larry
Date: 8/23/2016 10:18:00 PM
aww... what a wonderful warmhearted write, I just couldn't help but smile, family like that is so dear. :)
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 8/23/2016 10:25:00 PM
Thanks, Casarah! I appreciate you comment..Larry

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