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Wait a Bit Tree

Caught in branches
Struggle but thorns dig in deeper
Wait for help



"FLOWERS, TREES & SCRUBS I LUV HAIKU" contest by Sweet

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Andrea Dietrich

September 24, 2010 at 9:25 PM

I like this. I am trying to remember you, Sidney. your name is very familiar to me. Good grief. When was the last time we chatted?

Carol Sunshine Brown

August 12, 2010 at 10:04 AM

Congratulations Sidney on your win in Linda-Marie's contest" Flowers,Trees & Shrubs I Luv Haiku". Love, Carol

John Freeman

August 9, 2010 at 5:33 PM

Congratulations Sidney on your success in Linda's contest. Agape, Moses

Doris Culverhouse

August 8, 2010 at 5:53 PM

Funny...those are the worst

Francine Roberts

August 8, 2010 at 11:09 AM

congrats on your winning haiku

Andrea Dietrich

August 7, 2010 at 10:10 PM

Congratulations, Sidney!

Dr.Ram Mehta

August 7, 2010 at 10:01 PM

Congrats on the win, Sidney

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

August 7, 2010 at 6:50 AM

Congrats Sidney on your success in my Haiku contest with this rare beauty.. appreciate your constant support ..with luv..

Wilma Neels

August 7, 2010 at 5:31 AM

Don't you just hate those thorns hehe, all the best for Linda's contest as well.. Wilma

Jessica Arteaga

August 6, 2010 at 11:57 PM

OoOo i hate it when those threes have the scary thorns hope you didn't have to deal with that

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

August 6, 2010 at 8:24 PM

OK Sidney where are the funny ones tonight my friend.. seriously thankxxx for supporting my contest.. I have corrected my spelling error ..from 'scrubs' to 'shrubs'..sorry about that my friend..luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

August 6, 2010 at 8:24 PM

A nice haiku for the contest. Good luck

Wait a Bit Tree

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