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Wacky Weekend

For the Life without U and Me contest. Willy walks across the wild orchids Sporting a licking from nanny Kick, kick, kick my ball Sponsoring a bad day for all Soaking in the whys Hopping angry, "Today, I will go to Canada Nanny's gonna kiss this boy!" Wild thing in a slow snit Lips big and tripping his body, Down cast sight Will last all night! I think I did it with no "u-m-e"?

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Richard-Jamaal Keen

Date: 7/1/2010 10:30:00 AM

This is funny and wacky lol, but in a good way! I want to go to Canada as well

Skat A

Date: 6/30/2010 12:01:00 PM

DORIS YES IT IS A BIT WHACKY. LOVED IT. GOOD LUCK IF THIS IS FOR NIKKO'S CONTEST.-SKAT

Gert W. Knop

Date: 6/30/2010 4:37:00 AM

Yes, Doris, you did it and a nice story told!...Wish you best of luck for the contest and thank your for your kind comments always! Guess you really enjoyed this fireworks!! When my late uncle turned 95 we had also a fireworks for him...He died this year in January and by April he would have had his 99th birthday!!...Gert

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/29/2010 3:49:00 PM

You could just use go instead of run..Funny in a nonsensical sort of a way...Mom

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 6/29/2010 1:17:00 PM

you had a 'u' in run dear! please check that out. so it won't get you!

Carl Harris

Date: 6/29/2010 6:28:00 AM

This is a well expressed and appealing poem, Doris, and despite it's brevity, told a charming tale as well. Carl.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/28/2010 9:46:00 PM

Weather was 99 today but feels like 70 with the ocean breezes and balmy winds.. will definitely have to write some poetry on this lovely vacation... part two...haha.. luv...

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/28/2010 9:21:00 PM

Good one Doris ..enjoyed ... funny.. am still on vacation.. in Hawaii until July 4th with my LUV... be on and off Soup.. going to a LUAU soon...luv.. from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/28/2010 6:00:00 PM

Nice poem without using the three U M E