Wabi-Sabi

Wabi-Sabi A stunning beauty seen with moles on the cheek from a distance If be near, like spaceman, we find dry lowland area of dark rock, Shadows in holes where meteors hit, left craters, the Sun can’t hit. She relies on the Sun for light, the borrowed light throws on others And patronizes God-punished murderer Cain, adorned with horns Becoming more luring in getting the dark spots of Cain’s horns. As all of us hold secrets, never telling it to others She never ever shows her darker side to anyone of us We the poets, lovers, get enchanted, mad by this lunar beauty
========================================= ** God put Carn for murdering his own brother adorning with horns on the Moon as a punishment. Sometimes the dark spots on the moon looks like horns. *, wabi-sabi is Japanese word meaning “to find beauty in imperfection and profundity in nature*” +++++ Date : 12-5-13 Dr. Ram Mehta Contest: Seeing Beauty in Imperfection by nette onclaud =============================================================
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Harper Avatar
January 16, 2014 at 5:57 PM
Dr. Ram Mehta, lovely poem showing us even the imperfect has admirable traits.
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December 18, 2013 at 3:18 PM
Enjoyed learning the name meaning here Dr Ram, good reading this winner..'
Horsch Avatar
December 18, 2013 at 6:55 AM
Nice win Dr Ram, Just keep them coming....Roger
Hamilton Avatar
December 18, 2013 at 6:51 AM
very good Ram congrats on win Shadow x smile hug
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December 17, 2013 at 9:49 PM
nice win...PD
Jones Avatar
December 17, 2013 at 6:16 PM
Dr Ram...this is an outstanding poem...congratulations
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December 17, 2013 at 12:52 PM
I love the poem and explanation. Congrats on a fine piece of writing.
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December 17, 2013 at 10:47 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem in the: "SEEING BEAUTY..." contest, Dr.Ram. - A pleasure to read your poem and a pleasure to take part. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Hamilton Avatar
December 8, 2013 at 3:36 PM
very good poem Ram gl in contest Shadow x smile hug
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December 6, 2013 at 5:58 PM
Dr. Ram: Thanks for your lesson in WabI Sabi. I am an artist and I enjoy drawing obese women and very old people .I always see a beauty and character in this and now you have defined it.
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December 5, 2013 at 8:10 PM
Lovely expressions! I really enjoyed reading. It has an unusual wisdom to it that I highly respect. Thanks again for sharing. Always, Laura
Sergi Avatar
December 5, 2013 at 7:32 PM
interesting poem enjoyed it very much l like how you used infused Japanese into the poem
Dunn Avatar
December 5, 2013 at 5:22 PM
Love the beauty and the combining of poetry and space cool write. cheri
Lamoureux Avatar
December 5, 2013 at 10:14 AM
Good morning Dr. Ram.
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December 4, 2013 at 4:55 PM
Very unique piece, I like it Dr.Ram.
Dietrich Avatar
December 4, 2013 at 3:50 PM
so clever how you used that japenese phrase for this poem and this makes me wonder who you are describing!!
Horne Avatar
December 4, 2013 at 2:24 PM
lovely write, Dr Ram
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December 4, 2013 at 9:17 AM
Yes, the moon does enchant...an true enchantress....Thanks for the lesson! :) I didn't know what that term meant. That drew me in to read.
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