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WABI-SABI

WABI-SABI The vase lay broken on the floor Pieces scattered, whole no more Collected, to try and make again Yet its beauty may forever wane Glue and gold wire used to repair Never to be perfect as I’m aware Yet still is worthy of my attention And ongoing healing intervention Cracks now mended, yet still seen A sad reflection of what it’s been No longer stood in pride of place Almost ashamed to show its face A hint of the beauty gone before One missing piece is its tiny flaw

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Date: 12/4/2023 4:04:00 PM
your title was perfect in its allusion to wabi sabi. the illusive beauty of imperfection. I appreciate the concept of attention although the piece is now imperfect. I loved this poem. It felt like genuine poetry to me. Reminds me of my mother's words, "there's perfection within imperfection." Am faving this one. enjoy your evening, Sara
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