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vowelless is a rhymed-monoku no vowels no title.

n gribld's rtrt - th bsct crmbld s swt

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Date: 2/2/2025 3:57:00 PM
I think I got half of it. Are the rhyming words retreat and sweet? I'm thinking the biscuit crumbled is sweet. No idea on the second word! Soupmail
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Date: 2/2/2025 6:11:00 AM
feels like a puzzle. difficult form dear poet, vowels breathe life to words, I now realize the crucial role they play in the language.
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