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Vulnerable

vulnerable tears continually stream well like eyes her mascara darkens, complementing her misery voluptuous legs apprehensively taping earth perpetually Though she holds whole any eye knew her soul had been shattered buzzard like males deceitfully grin of her vulnerability they’ve spotted beauty beneath her hurt whispering in the depths of which shall have the opportunity at such potential the well groomed buzzard with nice wings soars toward with an supercilious swagger he sings a sorrowful song with a several notes of deception her aura meets the color range of her mascara as she screams till he fly’s away I smirk looking at his defeated flock with a grin that said “vulnerable my ass”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/7/2009 6:36:00 AM
a great story here, I especially like the last line.
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Date: 4/5/2009 4:35:00 PM
nice insight! Light & Love
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Date: 4/5/2009 6:58:00 AM
This poem is great. It describes a real life issue. All too often, some young vulnerable girl doesn't see hurt coming. Life can become devastating and almost unbearable. Poems like this one, if sufficiently circulated or published in a book, might bring an awarness that would help prevent the vulnerable from those circling buzzards. Excellent write!.
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Date: 4/4/2009 4:00:00 AM
Another nice piece from you James..well done.
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Date: 4/3/2009 10:29:00 PM
This is great showing that even with a broken heart and the vulenerability of having lost love a woman can find hidden strength and still survive. Great write... Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 4/3/2009 7:41:00 PM
Awesome write James. Love the last line...
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Date: 4/3/2009 7:11:00 PM
What an intriguing write, James. Sounds like the buzzard got what was coming to him as he preyed on the vulnerable woman. Love that last line!!
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