Vulnerable

As the sting of betrayal pierced your heart; your tears were exposed, for all to see. And as reason raced through a gauntlet of choices, you realized each one devastated your heart. You woke from a dream, composed of reality defused with imagination: whereas love was tentative, at best. And yet, so precious as to awe you with its beauty, and yet scare you with its fragility. Walling off your heart, you cried over the pain Hope had inflicted. Love once felt passionate, and on fire; yet that degree of heat left you vulnerable, like a moth to a flame. A moth cannot help being a moth; with all its urges and desires; while the flame cannot be anything but a flame. And so, the meeting of the two, although spectacular, is doomed to be short-lived. Like a moth to Fire's flame, you were seduced by the heat of deceitful words; and you fell prey to their sway. Only to realize love was but an illusion, when, like a puff of smoke, it disappeared today.
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Ashley Avatar
June 1, 2019 at 7:22 PM
Wow! The sad beauty of the emotional outpouring is as captivating as it is soul-baring. Such poignancy, pain and passion is expressed in this lost love gem, Emile. Simply superb! Congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes always my friend.. ~Susan
Pinet Avatar
June 1, 2019 at 7:33 PM
Thanks so much Susan, your words honor me my friend, Emile.
Ibeh Avatar
May 30, 2019 at 3:45 PM
Such a fabulous poem, Emile:-) Congratulations on your win,
Pinet Avatar
May 30, 2019 at 5:34 PM
Thanks Edward, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 25, 2019 at 2:14 AM
This poem has such depth of pain that the emotions are almost palpable Emile. It's sadness profound. Congratulations on your deserving second placement. xxoo
Pinet Avatar
April 25, 2019 at 8:11 AM
Thanks Connie, I always appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
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