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Vulnerability Wise

Allow yourself to trial and error
So you can embrace better 
And better result in the end
In love, grow to the sun
Having the ability to love and chase
Is the best gift life can give you.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 12/19/2024 3:36:00 PM

Hello Hugo, This a wonderful poem. I enjoyed to read. Much love here. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/21/2024 9:14:00 AM

Hello Hugo, Hugo, your response makes a lotr of sense. Love you more. /Darlene/

Hugo Sarvida Jr.
Date: 12/19/2024 7:52:00 PM

Our life is really an exposure to all element. Before a person turn into pure gold, he or she must go into all elements of sacrifice, persecution, fire and tribulation to know what maturity and growth means. This world is only for the brave in heart, matured individual, the tested one, the overcoming fellow. These are qualities of a winner. If losing end, bounce back and try again doing those qualities until the goals meet. Thank you, Darlene for reading this poem. Love you more./Hugo.