Vulcan's Mercy

Hard-chromed and brutally alloyed
he fed the scrapyard hurricane.
Melting the metal, his brawn enjoyed
the splash of sweat cooling the pain.

The weight of the world discarded
at the foot of his furnace lit,
he struggled to make soon parted
its history, hard and fast writ …

 … in twisted iron and mangled steel.
Stoking the fire, hellishly hot,
a cauldron of memories once real,
he freed the souls of things forgot.
 
Unthicked by his lethean flame,
smelted loose of its heavy years,
the once gritty metal flowed tame,
shiny new without smiles or tears.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Ekwobi Avatar
July 6, 2022 at 9:39 AM
A Poem of Acceptance of the Smelting Job. Its power, its joy, seclusion, underlying mysteries and even its offered hopes comparable to Plastic Surgery’s . The Poem Vulcan’s Mercy beautifully does this in Consistent Alternate Rhymes.
Tugwell Avatar
July 16, 2022 at 1:33 PM
That is a very interesting take, Chinedum. I like it. I didn't until now how my words could say that. -- DT
Mccann Avatar
June 22, 2022 at 6:29 PM
Your Vulcan reminded me of the blacksmith shop I used to visit after school. He let us watch from a distance this bright flame, these heavy hammers. Thank you Elizabeth McCann
Tugwell Avatar
June 26, 2022 at 3:21 PM
Interesting, Elizabeth. The genesis of the poem was a visit to a scrapyard while visiting an old crewmate of mine. The great clash of metal on metal and then the roar of the furnace with a great orange flash. Quite the sight. -- DT
Agustin Avatar
February 20, 2022 at 7:03 AM
"Thanks for sharing this. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." God bless you."
Tugwell Avatar
February 20, 2022 at 8:37 AM
Thank you, Beata. "Lord, I need You. Without You I can do no good, for You are the vine and I am a branch. But, I am Your branch. Please help me abide in You as You abide in me." -- Regards, DT
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February 19, 2022 at 3:42 PM
Hi Richard…..really great poem! Debx
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