Pace Ink-U-Script Poet Shape

Vows To My True Love

Like the smallest intake of air; I deserve not. Like a fantasy and dream
of a woman to have, honor, cherish and love till death;
I deserve not. But God has been
so good to me, even through
the sins amongst my
internal image
that I've
committed 
several 
times over.
Confessions after
confessions after
confessions, and yet, I'm
breathing in an abundance of
air and I've been blessed with a
woman that's greater than any fantasy and dream
of many dreams. Thank you Father for blessing me...(sigh) Thank you.



Pace, G INK-U-SCRIPT
03-27-2013

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Mahtab Bangalee December 4, 2019 at 3:55 AM there is the true love in the wings of nightingale, heart flying there to mingle ...//

Darlene De Beaulieu April 5, 2018 at 3:22 PM Hello Pace Ink -U Script,I would like to comment on your romantic love poem.i see your oem this way. It is a beautiful poem. have a nice day my friend.

Twanna Irisha January 23, 2015 at 1:53 PM Beautiful.

Ken Jordan August 30, 2014 at 10:21 AM Pace, I want to thank you for this inspiring piece of poetic work, beautiful indeed! God, is blessing you....:) Keep your head to the sky...Ken

Brittany Cuneo June 5, 2014 at 11:10 PM beautiful poem, wish there were more men out there like you. Keep up the good work :)

Robert Lindley June 4, 2014 at 6:47 PM Great design but the words and message eclipse even that. Fantastic write!!!!!

Pandita Sietesantos June 2, 2014 at 8:42 PM So creatively beautiful - I love it!

Mel Merrill April 23, 2014 at 12:59 AM Wow dude, since I still don't know your name. Great, fun, interesting write, my friend. If there's anything I can do to help boost your following, let me know. Sucks when no one reads your stuff lol Later...Mel :) Pace Ink-U-Script April 23, 2014 at 8:35 AM Thanks for stopping by Mel...

Poet Destroyer A March 12, 2014 at 9:37 PM Dashing my way through your poems. Saw you online, thought you might of had a new one for us to read... always~ LINDA

Honestly J.T. September 9, 2013 at 8:43 PM I like this poem and the hour glass shape. Honest words you have here

Maricel Estoque August 24, 2013 at 8:30 PM This is a beautiful poem. You're emotions seep through. I loved it (: -Maricel

John Posey July 7, 2013 at 7:57 AM My dear friend, I read this and think we must have married sisters...Jake

Bradley Musgrave June 27, 2013 at 8:29 PM Simply put... excellent and honest.

Cherie Thomas June 12, 2013 at 10:10 AM Wow!!! What a expression of true love.....ink, deep words that are felt , from the heart.....just lovely,,Cherie

Twanna Irisha June 6, 2013 at 12:08 PM Beautiful poem...she's a lucky woman.

Sara Kendrick May 24, 2013 at 7:04 AM Great that you would write this one honoring the woman that you love..Sara

Elai Cee May 5, 2013 at 10:41 PM cute!

Laura Breidenthal April 17, 2013 at 5:20 PM That moment of silence with the sigh was perfect. It really does show how thankful you are. Such a powerful poem. I really enjoyed reading some of your work today! Always, Laura

Donna Hudson April 14, 2013 at 6:03 PM very well writing I liked it very much

Ivy Vresk April 11, 2013 at 6:49 PM Thanks for a comment,your poem is nicely done I like it ,Ivy

Roberlynn Jones April 11, 2013 at 6:41 PM Thanks for the comment, and very nice poem.

Poet Destroyer A April 11, 2013 at 6:34 PM Ink* you are blessed and this is sweet... .. Have yourself a nice one, always & forever* Linda"

Ale A A April 11, 2013 at 6:09 PM Mister you are so good. You work always flows smoothly and draws me in. It's like candy good to the last drop.

Wilma Neels April 7, 2013 at 10:07 AM I felt like sighing too Pace and it made me smile.. Beautiful piece of poetry and I love the sincerity of this write of yours. Hope you are enjoying the weekend :)

Harry Horsman April 4, 2013 at 9:02 AM wow the sincerity comes through here, a time capsule of time reverberates through this hour glass..

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