Vows To My True Love

Like the smallest intake of air; I deserve not. Like a fantasy and dream of a woman to have, honor, cherish and love till death; I deserve not. But God has been so good to me, even through the sins amongst my internal image that I've committed several times over. Confessions after confessions after confessions, and yet, I'm breathing in an abundance of air and I've been blessed with a woman that's greater than any fantasy and dream of many dreams. Thank you Father for blessing me...(sigh) Thank you.
Pace, G INK-U-SCRIPT 03-27-2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 12/4/2019 3:55:00 AM
there is the true love in the wings of nightingale, heart flying there to mingle ...//
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Date: 4/5/2018 3:22:00 PM
Hello Pace Ink -U Script,I would like to comment on your romantic love poem.i see your oem this way. It is a beautiful poem. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 1/23/2015 1:53:00 PM
Beautiful.
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Date: 8/30/2014 10:21:00 AM
Pace, I want to thank you for this inspiring piece of poetic work, beautiful indeed! God, is blessing you....:) Keep your head to the sky...Ken
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Date: 6/5/2014 11:10:00 PM
beautiful poem, wish there were more men out there like you. Keep up the good work :)
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Date: 6/4/2014 6:47:00 PM
Great design but the words and message eclipse even that. Fantastic write!!!!!
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Date: 6/2/2014 8:42:00 PM
So creatively beautiful - I love it!
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Date: 4/23/2014 12:59:00 AM
Wow dude, since I still don't know your name. Great, fun, interesting write, my friend. If there's anything I can do to help boost your following, let me know. Sucks when no one reads your stuff lol Later...Mel :)
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Date: 4/23/2014 8:35:00 AM
Thanks for stopping by Mel...
Date: 3/12/2014 9:37:00 PM
Dashing my way through your poems. Saw you online, thought you might of had a new one for us to read... always~ LINDA
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Date: 9/9/2013 8:43:00 PM
I like this poem and the hour glass shape. Honest words you have here
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Date: 8/24/2013 8:30:00 PM
This is a beautiful poem. You're emotions seep through. I loved it (: -Maricel
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Date: 7/7/2013 7:57:00 AM
My dear friend, I read this and think we must have married sisters...Jake
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Date: 6/27/2013 8:29:00 PM
Simply put... excellent and honest.
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Date: 6/12/2013 10:10:00 AM
Wow!!! What a expression of true love.....ink, deep words that are felt , from the heart.....just lovely,,Cherie
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Date: 6/6/2013 12:08:00 PM
Beautiful poem...she's a lucky woman.
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Date: 5/24/2013 7:04:00 AM
Great that you would write this one honoring the woman that you love..Sara
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Date: 5/5/2013 10:41:00 PM
cute!
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Date: 4/17/2013 5:20:00 PM
That moment of silence with the sigh was perfect. It really does show how thankful you are. Such a powerful poem. I really enjoyed reading some of your work today! Always, Laura
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Date: 4/14/2013 6:03:00 PM
very well writing I liked it very much
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Date: 4/11/2013 6:49:00 PM
Thanks for a comment,your poem is nicely done I like it ,Ivy
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Date: 4/11/2013 6:41:00 PM
Thanks for the comment, and very nice poem.
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Date: 4/11/2013 6:34:00 PM
Ink* you are blessed and this is sweet... .. Have yourself a nice one, always & forever* Linda"
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Date: 4/11/2013 6:09:00 PM
Mister you are so good. You work always flows smoothly and draws me in. It's like candy good to the last drop.
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Date: 4/7/2013 10:07:00 AM
I felt like sighing too Pace and it made me smile.. Beautiful piece of poetry and I love the sincerity of this write of yours. Hope you are enjoying the weekend :)
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Date: 4/4/2013 9:02:00 AM
wow the sincerity comes through here, a time capsule of time reverberates through this hour glass..
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