Vow & Energy Renewal

so much behind us -
may the next thirty-five years. . .
go slow and easy!


For LInda- Marie's "Voicing Vows" Contest
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Babcock Avatar
March 22, 2011 at 4:30 PM
I know it gets better over time and lots don't even make 5 years together. It does take a lot of energy to make a marriage. love phyl
Anish Avatar
August 24, 2010 at 7:08 PM
Nice romantic sentiment here! You stuck to the 5-7-5 form which is all to the good. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
Augustus Avatar
August 22, 2010 at 6:04 PM
This is a very simple poem that is impactful in its in right. Its very few words that express a lovely desire. Thanks for commenting On my poem "Look At My Man-go." By the way, the fruit is in the title and how I describe him as well.
A   Avatar
August 22, 2010 at 8:55 AM
Oi, Linda, and her contest! She is wonderful,, i am sure you will do good in her contest.By the way i am leaving you s-mail,..p.d.
Dufresne Avatar
August 22, 2010 at 5:35 AM
I'm hearing you there, Andrea! Cool senryu. Thought provoking. ...... as per your comment on Limerick about Linda's contest --did not enter it as she expressed rhyme only...just havin' some fun.. congrats to you..
Kapoor Avatar
August 22, 2010 at 3:37 AM
Excellent wish in this lovely Senryu and a well deserving win in the contest. Congrats my friend and thanks for your lovely comments on my poem Evening Music of Nature. Love and best wishes.....Ravindra....Andrea Dietrich
A  Avatar
August 21, 2010 at 6:23 PM
Yes may they:-) lol! Nice, Andrea*luv~SKAT
Devonshire Avatar
August 21, 2010 at 7:40 AM
Congratulations on your win with this super senryu, Andrea! There are lots of young folks on the site who don't know Ben Casey either. I liked Kildare better. He was way cuter to me as a kid. Love, Carolyn
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August 21, 2010 at 5:23 AM
Great Senryu Andrea, wonderful write.. always Michael
Bloomsfield Avatar
August 21, 2010 at 12:37 AM
Yes i do wish the best for someone as special as you. .beautiful!
K. Avatar
August 20, 2010 at 11:38 PM
Dropping by to say congrats dearie :) -- & thanks for that 'award' of mine, you are too kind, lol :) hope you had a healthy dose of reality :) & I am more than happy being your loyal friend-- you honestly deserve that award!! Not only in Chris' blog but in so many others' as well-- ;) haha shame on Chris if he got tired of me talking about you though ;)--hugs, nikko :)
Mannan Avatar
August 20, 2010 at 10:24 PM
Wow an amazing vow. Many many congrats dear.
Freeman Avatar
August 20, 2010 at 4:55 PM
Congratulations Andrea, on your #2 Agape, Moses
Chachere Avatar
August 20, 2010 at 3:13 PM
hm, lets hope so. just keep the faith.. ~Always&Forever Lynette
Loving Iii Avatar
August 20, 2010 at 12:33 PM
why is it some people have it and i don't.jhl
Kendrick Avatar
August 20, 2010 at 11:32 AM
When one reaches the top of the hill, speed picks up and zip your are gone..Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
Johnson Avatar
August 20, 2010 at 10:11 AM
How nice Andrea. congratulations. Love,Joyce
Brown Avatar
August 20, 2010 at 8:55 AM
Congratulations on your win Andrea in Linda-Marie's contest "Voicing Vows". Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
August 20, 2010 at 8:08 AM
Congrats Andrea on your success in my Voicing Vows contest with these lovely words... appreciate your constant support.. ciao with luv..
Devonshire Avatar
August 20, 2010 at 8:07 AM
Great vows that encompass dreams for decades of happiness, Andrea. Best wishes in the contest. I pulled the poem I had originally written for John Heck's contest after reading his blog. He said he wanted our best-ever poem. Love, Carolyn
Walters Avatar
August 20, 2010 at 7:52 AM
Where ever we find ourselves in life this is a great philosophy! Slow and easy sounds so peaceful and inviting! Beautiful Senryu! Hugs, Kris~
Neels Avatar
August 20, 2010 at 5:49 AM
Hey Andrea, this is really a beautiful write you have here.. Hope you show this to your hubby :) Good luck with the contest as well.. love you Wilma Ps: Oh yes, my mom really didn't know about me, will tell you the story some time, just not on here hehe.. maybe via email?
K. Avatar
August 20, 2010 at 5:22 AM
smiles as I read this-- I suppose if I ever do get lucky to have somebody spend 35 years with me, that I'd be hoping the same thing, lol! your title was very fitting as well--- eeeeek I am like ummm 3 or is that 4 hours in?? and I am not yet donnnnee-- haha I sound like such a whiner! perhaps you'd be awake later & I haven't emailed you yet well I hope not-- hugs nikko :) & PS now I am soo tempted to write for Linda's contest ok maybe I'll write something quick like right now...hopeless me....
Culverhouse Avatar
August 20, 2010 at 4:21 AM
enjoyed this simple write...well done!
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 19, 2010 at 10:18 PM
Very nice thoughts in this Senryu Andrea. Many get so confused as to the difference between Senryu and Haiku. Good luck in the contest.
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