Vow

I made a vow on a day divine To hold your hands in mine May it be rain or shine. In the years that followed the day Our hands never went astray Rather, your hand in mine led the way. In every sky of grey and blue I kept my word to you Together, we witnessed the dawn anew. In times of departed sand I am holding your resting hand While I sit in a headstone land.
20th April 2023 Contest: Writing Challenge V words Sponsored by Constance La France
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La France Avatar
April 24, 2023 at 5:44 AM
Akanksha, thank you so much for sharing your poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
Ayantika Avatar
April 24, 2023 at 8:18 AM
Always good to participate. Thanks for my HM
Congratulations on your win in the Contest...Ankansha.
Ayantika Avatar
April 24, 2023 at 8:17 AM
Thank you very much!
Andresen Avatar
April 23, 2023 at 3:11 AM
- Congrats on your H/M, Akanksha :) - hugs
Ayantika Avatar
April 23, 2023 at 3:31 AM
Thanks so much:)
Y. Avatar
April 22, 2023 at 12:06 PM
Hi Akanksa, I echo what Daniel said. Congrats on your HM. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis
Ayantika Avatar
April 23, 2023 at 3:30 AM
Thank you!
Turner Avatar
April 20, 2023 at 8:41 AM
True love never dies:) A sad poem, Akanksha.
Ayantika Avatar
April 20, 2023 at 9:51 AM
Very true! Thank you for the visit
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