Vortex Forseen

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a Gaudier Brezeka tribute

momentary
             fits of enthusiasm
             great in promise
             visible on the horizon
sanguine features
              objects of stimulation
              in a fine beautiful spirit
              gentleness
                     with humour
in delicate movements
               statues
                    sketches& a few
                     page on art
                                      en passant

such shafts of light
          faculty of sythesis
          with a
            faculty of comprehension
sculptured energy
        life in the absolute
        such intensity
                           of existence
         in a petrified 
                           semblance
such opulent maturity
   yet
        a fragmented
                      potential
into
       a stasis
                 of defiance
                               free of influence
a sense of stone
in stylised shapes
in opulent curves

as assembled digest
      unyielding in scope

          a consumable scope
for restless inquisitions
now vaguely forgotten
shortened
        by the strain of war
         but
             with 
                accomplished
                             ease
in a vortex forseen

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